Directions: Suppose you are Wei Qiang and you will graduate from university. Write a letter of inquiry to the Department of Physics, University of Wisconsin, asking for admission as a graduate student.
July, 2007
Dear Sirs,
I am very interested in undertaking graduate work in your university. I have read research papers by two of your professors Dr. Thomas Bay and Mr. Sherry Haily. I’d like to study under their guidance.
In September of 2003 I was enrolled in the Computer School of the XYZ University as a computer major. Throughout the four years of study, I take this field as one of great potentials for my country. I feel the need to study further in order to develop well in this area.
I would appreciate receiving your materials such as departmental brochure or pamphlet, and a university catalog or bulletin.
Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.
Dear Professor @@@：
I plan to study for a master degree in @@@@@i@@@. As Iknow; China is a basic gap in this area ,so i think it may has tremendous; prospects.That&39;s why i choose it for my study .On the web of waseda; university,I have read many massages about teachers. I find your research; is perfectly fit my interset.Then I have decided to write a letter to you.; I have had plentiful preparations. In April of 2002, the technological; seminar of Sino-Japanese microwave was held in my school. The ITtechnology; of Japan impressed me a lot.From that time,i had a plan for study in; japan.In the university, I have studied a lot of important basic courses; and professional courses.My university is one of china&39;s key universities; which is famous for its information and Electronic research.So it gave mea; good environment for study and I got very extensive and intensive; education.At the last two years of my university life,I often helped my; professor in his own research by translang some English essays that; professor is too busy to translate .During this period i has been muchmore; engross in doing independent research than preparing for exams.That; really improve my knowlege and expertise.In additon,I graduated and gotthe; bachelor&39;s degree in July of 2005.Besides,i have a short time working; experience in business sector of a Hongkong company that enriches my; theory and society skill.In January of 2006,i arrived at tokyo.Now i am; studying japanese in tokyo.;; Are you going to recruit any new master students in the near future? Of; course it would be great if yes, and I&39;m very willing to start discussion; on a proposal with you.Anyway I&39;m looking forward to hearing from you, no; matter what the answer could be.Owing to the limited space available, i; attatch my personal statement ,project reporter which is finish ed in my; third year of university ,research plan in the attachment.; Thank you!; Sincerely yours,;
Albert Zhang
Dear Admission Office:
I am writing to strongly recommend Miss/Mr. ____ for admission into the famous University of Waterloo.
Through teaching and informal consultation, I had chances to get to know her/him academic potentials and her/him ideals before she/he left for Canada. In my opinion she/he can be reliably graded as one of the best undergraduates here in 2002 grade students with majors in our department. Miss/Mr. is apparently a very bright student, with special interests and enjoyment in mathematics especially in passionate and innovative ways of tackling and solving various problems in mathematics. Perhaps her/his present mathematics scores in Canada could support my view. She/he has very good observatory skills in experiments and can easily glean essence from complicated concepts, phenomena or conditions. Enthusiastic for novelty and creative thinkings and as evidence for leadership potentials, she can easily influence her/his classmates in both curricular and extracurricular activities, though only within not a long period before her/his transfer from this institution to another school in Canada, a brave move toward next stage of personal challenge and fulfilment. I was particularly impressed by Miss/Mr. __X career goal of aiming for excellence in academic education and achievements in her/his chosen field.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if I can be of further assistance.
With best wishes.
Sincerely,
